
What is this book about?
Raimi Carter is finally a girl, just like she always knew she was meant to be. At a new school where nobody knows she’s had gender reassignment surgery, she hopes to finally live the normal life she’s longed for, happy in her own skin.Life is great until she discovers a dangerous bully is blackmailing head cheerleader, Clare Strickland, threatening to reveal her secret: she’s gay. As Raimi fights to free Clare from his clutches, the two girls move beyond friendship. But secrets from their pasts and their own fears of coming out tear them apart—maybe forever. Baring their souls to each other could cost them everything. For two girls trapped and desperately in love, only strength, courage, and trust in each other will help them break free and claim their future.
My Thoughts....
The best thing about this book is that it is a very quick read.
I was happy to find a modern book about a transgender-ed teen. Not only is Raimi transgender-ed but she has also completed her 'change' from a male body to a female body. She is starting a new life in a new town as a female. I was excited to read this as it is not a topic that is written about enough. However, I was very disappointed.
The actual writing is terrible. It is very sharp, for a lack of a better word. It seems more like an essay than a story. Sentences are to short, there is to much telling and not enough showing, if that makes any sense to anyone but me. Instead of saying something like " She tossed her long brown hair over her slim shoulders" it is written like "she has long, straight brown hair."
The characters are under developed and unrealistic. Raimi is a self righteous horror- she looks down on her peers and is very judgmental for someone who does not want to be judged. The writing is very cliched, filled with teen drinking, drugs, sex, bullying and rape. And it seems the entire teen population of the town all participated in one or more of these things. While I understand that this is the life some teens lead, it is not the life of all teens. The ending was abrupt and unexpected.
I think this book has potential. The plot and the characters need to be developed more. The style of writing needs to be more descriptive and not so cliched. In my opinion, it needs a re-write and a great editor!









